The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005

The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005
The line graph compares, car theft, house
burgling
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burglary
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and street
robbery
in England and Wales between the years 1970 and 2005. To summarize, in the given period in England and
Wales
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,Wales
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the number of cars stolen stood first followed by house
burgling
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burglary
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and road
robbery
. In the
year
1970, street
robbery
was minimal,
while
0.2
million
and 0.4
million
housing burgling and the number of cars missed respectively. Till the
year
1990, road
robbery
remained the same,
then
slightly processed in the
year
2005.
However
, until 1980 crime rate rapidly increased in housing burgling and car theft.
Further
, house theft stayed neutral till the
year
1985 with 0.6
million
, later rose for a few years and dropped to 0.5
million
in the
year
2005.
On the contrary
, the number of cars stolen increased till the
year
1995,
whereas
after that started to decline and reached 1
million
in the
year
2005.
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