WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant experience from your own experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days

majority

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the majority

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of

peoples

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people

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are interested in replacement of

the

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old

buildings

and

houses

in cities with more modern

buildings

. The question is what is the impact of

such

replacement? In

this

essay, I am going to discuss

the

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both point of

views

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view

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who advocate and who is against the idea. In terms of Advantages, Nowadays replacing the old

houses

with new modern

buildings

have

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a lot of benefits,

Firstly

, the new

buildings

will be

more

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safer than the old exhausted ones, The main reason given to support

this

claim is that the new modern

buildings

could protect the life of it's residents much more better.

In addition

, the modern designs and style improve the quality of life for the

peoples

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people

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who

are lived

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inside those

buildings

.

Secondly

, the facilities required recently inside the homes like internet, Air conditions, etc. may not be fitted easily on the old

houses

As the infrastructure not designed

accordingly

.

However

,

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the old architecture for the old

houses

reflect

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the sense of civilization of the country for the tourists who are interested

to visit

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in visiting

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the country and

discovered

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the history and the stories behind

such

old

houses

,

Consequently

, It could be considered

as

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a witness to the age

In addition

it reflect the sense of parents.

Hence

as we always

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that

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old is gold. In Conclusion,

However

the

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both opinions have a strong rationale to assist their words,

Also

as the implementation of both ideas

are

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valid. but I could

found

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find

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myself more

bias

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to

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toward

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the

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replacing the old

buildings

and

houses

with new modern ones in order to keep updated with the new

decades

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decade's

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requirements.