Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing
this
letter about your advertisement that I read over
the newspaper about a helper for summer. I can help you Change preposition
in
in
your household chores Change preposition
with
such
as cleaning, laundry and more. My organization skills are pretty good, it
might be helpful to maintain your home in perfect condition. I Correct word choice
so it
had
worked for a hotel as a chef and in hospitality too, currently working in a restaurant. It will be enjoyable to help you Wrong verb form
have
around
your daily work. To add, I Change preposition
with
also
had experience in caregiving. It might be pretty helpful for your nourishment.
Actually, I am here on a work visa. I need this
job to meet my daily expenses and for the upbringing of my child as well. As you know, it is quite expensive to fulfil your daily needs in this
inflation era. I also
need to pay off my student loan.
My availability will be in the evenings from Monday to Friday and any time on weekend
. AsFix the agreement mistake
weekends
,
I am already on a full-time placement in a restaurant. Sometimes, it might fluctuate Remove the comma
apply
on the contrary
I will give you a notification about that. I would love to hear back from you. Feel free to contact me if you have any further
concerns.
Yours regards,Submitted by manipreet1217 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
