While on a business trip in another city, you met an old friend who lives there. You are going on another business trip to this city soon and would like to see him/her again. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell him/her about your trip; say why you were happy to see him/her; suggest an arrangement for you to meet

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Dear John, I hope

this

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits.I am so excited to let you know that luckily I'm visiting your town once again in the

last

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week of

september

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September

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due to

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my latest marketing project related to

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an e-commerce

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e-commerce

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an e-commerce

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website. I will be landing on 22nd

september

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September

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9:00

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9.00

am in the morning.My company has already arranged my

accomodation

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accommodation

in the luxury "Taj Hotel" which is located just 3 km walking distance from your apartment.

However

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,My team has provided me to complete a task to explore various heritage tourist attractions in 1 week in India.And no one knows better than you the prestigious capital city of India-Delhi. Sometimes I still get some nostalgia

while

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rewinding our

last

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meet

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meeting

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in Delhi when I met you in a meeting where you were presenting your products to our

organsation

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organisation

and you did

fabulous

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a fabulous

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job in creating your customers and

hence

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,they are sending me

this

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time

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to buy more products but unfortunately,

due to

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lack of

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time

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,time

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I wasn't able to listen more of our childhood stories that only you can memorize better than me.

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tottally

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totally

valuable

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value

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your precious

time

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but if you will be able to make some

time

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during

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last

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the last

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week of the month

so that

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apply

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we can meet once again.That would make me so happy as I really want to spend

time

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with you

this

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time

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too.Please let me know which days will work best for you so that I

will

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can

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arrange my plan

accordingly

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. Hoping to hear from you soon. Kind Regards, Sam

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

257 words

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