The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram depicts the construction of a drinking filter and the functions of the production of clean drinking
water
. In ,general it is evident that there are many steps involved in
this
procedure Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readly apparent that to clean drinking
water
, there are three ingredients that must be added sand,charcoal and gravel. Looking at the diagram, it can seen that the
water
filter constrection
firstly
, needs a drum and after adding gravel in the bottom of the drum and next the charcoal and sand.
However
, in the upper of the drum add the
water
,
In addition
, we can observe that the procedure begins time
water
passes through a thin tube to another drink drum and continues the procedure
Finally
the storage drum will get clean
water
and drinking
water
.
Furthermore
,we can observe that there is on
water
filter and it is covered with a plastic lid
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • illustrates
  • simple water filter
  • constructed
  • functions
  • produce
  • clean drinking water
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • introduction
  • explanation
  • construction
  • description
  • filtered water
  • original water source
  • conclusion
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