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Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay hit. Other think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#gym #methods
Nowadays, humans are becoming to look after for health problems. So
people
go
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 to
gym
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the gym
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 to keep fit is the best choice.
Whereas
 some others it is necessary to go to the
gym
, but
also
 have
variety
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a variety
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ways
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of ways
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 to do
this
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both these points of view. On the one hand,
gym
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the gym
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help
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people
 keep fit. At the
gym
, they have ample
trainer
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trainers
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 to support and encourage
motivation
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 students. In the company,
people
 to
gym
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the gym
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 for two hours to burn calories
lead
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leads
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 to losing way and they feel comfortable,
relaxed
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and relaxed
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 after they
do
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go to
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gym
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the gym
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.
Moreover
, they will a good health. The trainer can understand both students and their
body
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bodies
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 to make a suitable lecture.
However
, some
person
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people
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 can not afford numerous extravagant
cost
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costs
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 so
that is
 the drawback of
gym
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the gym
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.
On the other hand
, it is not the sole choice to make themselves. Many
person
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people
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 will change or
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at leas
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leas
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least
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 alter their sports held in all life may be to refresh themselves. Meanwhile,
world
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has
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constantly
changed
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 annual year,
why
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so why
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people
must
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apply
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opt
the
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for the
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 lesson fitness they don’t like
.
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 Even if mental health is one of the factorial main require
relax
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, recollection of mind to be immersed in
the
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apply
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nature and become an athlete person hold themselves accountable.
To conclude
, mental fitness and physical body can be affected by a
heath
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healthy
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 lifestyle. So staying active all day
get
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is
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 a disaster.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical well-being
  • prime option
  • structured exercise routines
  • professional equipment
  • fostering an environment
  • motivation and discipline
  • counter-argument
  • outdoor activities
  • home workouts
  • cost-effectiveness
  • social and emotional satisfaction
  • team sports
  • hybrid approach
  • holistic approach
  • comprehensive benefits
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