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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the university's sports centre at present and how it is going to be after redevelopment in the future. As an overview, the building will gain much more
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 from east and west and there will be some other facilities which will replace the
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's outdoor courts. As can be observed, the gym will be much bigger
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 the
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 that will be added to
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 place from the outdoor court which is the east of the map. There will be
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 two new dance studios next to the gym which will be opened in the future as part of the given redevelopment plan.
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,at the east of the seating ,
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 there will be a sports hall which is next to the dance studios.
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,there will be changing rooms at the south corners of the building.
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, there will be some commercial facilities. There will be a cafe at the right of the entrance next to the changing room.
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, it can be seen there will be some sports shops on the left side of the entrance next to another changing room. Another significant feature that
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 future plan displays is the new leisure pool which is going to be constructed near the changing room
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 next to the 25-meter pool.
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