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The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the
export
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income
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 in a nation under five different types of
products
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, and the table depicts the comparison of
export
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 earning variation in each product percentage basis during 2015-2016.
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, it can be seen that petroleum
products
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 generated a high amount of
income
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,
while
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 textiles accounted for the lowest
income
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 from exports during 2015-2016.
However
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, earnings through apparel, engineered goods, and oil-based
products
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 have significantly increased,
whereas
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 the only product that decreased its
income
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 variation was stones and jewels base items. The country earned over 60
billion
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 in
income
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 in 2015, and that increased by 3% in 2016, a value of approximately 62
billion
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.
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, revenue from manufactured
products
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also
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 significantly increased during the given period of time, which comprised 57
billion
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 and 61
billion
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 respectively, with a percentage growth variation of 8.5%.
On the other hand
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, even though textile
products
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 accounted for the lowest
income
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 through
export
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, produce
income
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 grammatically went up by 15.24% compared to 2015 and gained around 31
billion
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 in revenue from
export
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 in 2016. Out of five different
products
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, only the product that decreased its
income
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 was gems and jewellery, 2015 It earned just over 44
billion
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 and
this
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 figure dropped by 5.18%, in ,addition it can be noticed that BY exporting farm produce country gained 31
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 of
income
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 despite
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 has marginally increased in 2016 at 0.81%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, income, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export categories
  • percentage change
  • economic implications
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • fluctuations
  • international trade relationships
  • top-performing categories
  • least performing categories
  • export values
  • global market trends
  • export priorities
  • economic strategies
  • future prospects
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