Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and yours opinion.

Many individuals think that taking part in the

gym

is the best choice to stay in shape

whereas

others consider that there are lots of effective methods for

health

promotion.

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essay will show that

stay

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staying

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in shape by participating

into

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in

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the

gym

more

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is more

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successful and will outline the main reasons why

this

can be achieved. The modern way of thinking is

gym

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the gym

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have lots of useful things that will bring advantages to many people who want to join in. It is a widely known fact that

gym

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a gym

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contains machines and

equipments

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equipment

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for many individuals to practice and improve

health

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their health

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.

Moreover

, the

gym

-goers can seek advice

of

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these experts regarding the diet they should follow, the muscles they should focus on, and how much exercise is appropriate for them.

For instance

, the dumbbells can be used to train the biceps,

while

the treadmill can boost a person's stamina.

Conversely

, there is a viewpoint that some methods may be suited to a normal person.

Instead

of being a member of the

gym

and

have

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to pay a substantial amount of membership fee, some people enjoy

articipating

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participating

in

a

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sports can be the solution.

taking

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part in games

such

as football, hockey cricket or badminton can help a person maintain their fitness level, since all these activities require a considerable amount of running, jumping and other forms of physical exertions. From my perspective, it is crucial that

gym

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the gym

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also

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is also

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the best place for many individuals

love

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to love

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taking part

in

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apply

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because of

good

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the good

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equipments

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equipment

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, machines and coaches.

This

can not only be achieved through training very hard-working to improve physical

health

,

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but

also

keeps

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by keeping

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mental

health

at

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in

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check.

This

is because

along with

bestowing physical benefits, sports

also

provide pleasure to the player. Taking everything into account,

it is clear that

by

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apply

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joining in practicing and improving physical

health

, and

also

combine between

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combining

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using

equipments

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equipment

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with

leadership

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the leadership

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of

coach

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a coach

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in training can be more easier and successful.