The chart above shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
The given bar chart compares the
number
of male and female Use synonyms
students
who attended Use synonyms
further
education in the UK, and whether they chose full-time or part-time study over a 20-year period. Linking Words
Overall
, studying full-time was the most dominant option for both genders Linking Words
although
more Linking Words
students
decided to study part-time over the years. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of women who received higher education experienced a substantial increase.
Concerning the figures for part-time studies, there were around 100 Use synonyms
thousand
male Use synonyms
students
studying part-time at the start of the period, doubling their female counterparts. Use synonyms
This
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number
grew steadily to more than 200 Use synonyms
thousand
in the years 1990 and 1991. In comparison, the sum of part-time female Use synonyms
students
escalated from 50 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1970/71 to almost 200 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1980/81, and finishing at the same level as males a decade later.
For the full-time Use synonyms
students
, the Use synonyms
number
of men was about 1000 Use synonyms
thousand
from the beginning, being more than the females by approximately 250 Use synonyms
thousand
. Use synonyms
However
, the figure Linking Words
of
males fluctuated considerably throughout the years and reached 900 Change preposition
for
thousand
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
In contrast
, full-time female scholars demonstrated a significant increase in two decades, overtaking the Linking Words
man
by 1990/91 (1100 Fix the agreement mistake
men
thousands
).Change to singular
thousand
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