The chart above shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
The given bar chart compares the
number
of male and female students
who attended further
education in the UK, and whether they chose full-time or part-time study over a 20-year period. Overall
, studying full-time was the most dominant option for both genders although
more students
decided to study part-time over the years. In addition
, the number
of women who received higher education experienced a substantial increase.
Concerning the figures for part-time studies, there were around 100 thousand
male students
studying part-time at the start of the period, doubling their female counterparts. This
number
grew steadily to more than 200 thousand
in the years 1990 and 1991. In comparison, the sum of part-time female students
escalated from 50 thousand
in 1970/71 to almost 200 thousand
in 1980/81, and finishing at the same level as males a decade later.
For the full-time students
, the number
of men was about 1000 thousand
from the beginning, being more than the females by approximately 250 thousand
. However
, the figure of
males fluctuated considerably throughout the years and reached 900 Change preposition
for
thousand
at the end
of the period. In contrast
, full-time female scholars demonstrated a significant increase in two decades, overtaking the man
by 1990/91 (1100 Fix the agreement mistake
men
thousands
).Change to singular
thousand
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