You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Dear Anna, I am glad to know that you have scored an
overall
8 band in the IELTS test.
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Congratulations
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your achievement. We are planning to have a surprise birthday
party
for John
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next Friday. As you know he
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not recovered from the death of his girlfriend and we want to go back
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home. He feeling
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extremely
homesick. We hope
this
party
will change his sad feelings for at least for few days. The
party
will be held in Jay's apartment on Park Avenue next Friday night starting at 7pm. I will pick you up at 5pm from your home. As you are an expert in cake making, please bring a cake for the
party
. I will bring wine and others will arrange food. Don't forget to write his name on the cake.
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of the
party
will be on Thursday night, If
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are you
you
interested, join us. Best wishes, Jennifer.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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