You have been going to a piano teacher for the past month. However, it no longer fits into your budget or busy schedule Write a letter to your piano teacher. In your letter: • Thank him for his efforts and time • Explain the changes in your circumstances • Explain that you may be able to pick it up again

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Dear Sir or Madam, After greetings, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I

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continue the piano course

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some personal circumstances,

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I may pick it up

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in the future when I have enough time to practice.

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, I would like to thank you for all your efforts we had great lessons together and you have been supportive, patient, and inspired. Unfortunately, my employer called to inquire about some financial reports missing at work,

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I have to get back to work to deal with

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matter urgently.

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issue could take a long time to be resolved, I am willing to continue our piano course when I am done with it,

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, I use the CD and video sessions you gave to help me not forget what you taught me. I am looking forward to meeting you again in the course room Best Regards. John Adam.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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7 paragraphs

155 words

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