A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer
Dear Sara,
I was thrilled when I saw your message that you’ll be camping at Banff National Park, Alberta for the first time ever
this
coming summer. Thanks for taking into account my advice. I would love to share my overall
experience with you.
Firstly
, you will enjoy the beauty of mountains which will definitely help you to soothe your mind and refresh all the brain cells. Moreover
, there are numerous activities which you will rejuvenate such
as hiking, paragliding, and cycling on different routes.
Before going on summer holiday, you should keep some important things in mind like don’t forget to keep a rechargeable lamp as there is no light at night, Apart from that better to have mosquito repellent as there are more dangerous insects. Along with
that weather is unpredictable so always keep your winter jacket.
Also
, thanks for inviting me to the camp but unfortunately, I am stuck with office work and won’t be able to get leave at that time period.
I really hope this
information will be useful for you.
Enjoy your holidays and have memorable moments with your family.
Best regards,
Joe WardenSubmitted by manpreetcanada90 on
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