Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that
music
is the
tool
that can spread traditional
culture
on a global scale,
while
some of them claim that it can be misused by some societies that want to discredit their foes. In my opinion, when
music
is used for entertainment purposes, it will connect
people
from different countries. On the one hand, some
people
want to
use
music
in different ways, one of them is used
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a governmental
tool
that can create a lack of communication
to
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other
people
.
For example
, Cambodian
people
use
music
to spread fake news that directly affects
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Thailand; they claim
this
music
is their
culture
,
while
Thailand argues
this
since they developed
this
style longer than Cambodia.
As a result
, both of them hated each other until the prime minister of Cambodia said sorry in
this
debate, it
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his fault that
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to
use
this
development
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be governmental
tool
.
On the other hand
,
this
era made the advances in technology that can share information very convenient;
this
technology is a platform to spread each unique
culture
to another global area. To illustrate, social media can share videos in
real time
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making animation companies in Japan
use
this
opportunity to develop cartoons that have gimmicks in their traditional
music
such
as Kansai style.
Thus
,
people
who watch the animation can learn about Japanese
culture
, and the owners can be proud of themselves which is viewed by various communities. In conclusion,
although
music
can be a
tool
that discredits the opposite side, it can be used on a social media platform that can post
this
music
to give knowledge about the owner of it.
Hence
, I think if we
use
music
with ethics that
use
only way of entertainment, everyone will receive only happiness same as in Japan who
use
the internet to share their
music
style.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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