Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is argued that
music
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is the
tool
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that can spread traditional
culture
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on a global scale,
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some of them claim that it can be misused by some societies that want to discredit their foes. In my opinion, when
music
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is used for entertainment purposes, it will connect
people
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from different countries. On the one hand, some
people
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want to
use
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music
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in different ways, one of them is used
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a governmental
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that can create a lack of communication
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with
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other
people
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.
For example
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, Cambodian
people
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use
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music
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to spread fake news that directly affects
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Thailand; they claim
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music
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is their
culture
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,
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Thailand argues
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since they developed
this
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style longer than Cambodia.
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, both of them hated each other until the prime minister of Cambodia said sorry in
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debate, it
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his fault that
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he wanted
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to
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this
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development
to
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as
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be governmental
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.
On the other hand
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,
this
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era made the advances in technology that can share information very convenient;
this
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technology is a platform to spread each unique
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to another global area. To illustrate, social media can share videos in
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making animation companies in Japan
use
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this
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opportunity to develop cartoons that have gimmicks in their traditional
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such
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as Kansai style.
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,
people
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who watch the animation can learn about Japanese
culture
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, and the owners can be proud of themselves which is viewed by various communities. In conclusion,
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music
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can be a
tool
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that discredits the opposite side, it can be used on a social media platform that can post
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music
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to give knowledge about the owner of it.
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, I think if we
use
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music
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with ethics that
use
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only way of entertainment, everyone will receive only happiness same as in Japan who
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the internet to share their
music
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style.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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