A glance at the provided pie charts reveal how many hours are spent in the library by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to all students at university of Britain.
A glance at the provided pie charts
reveal
how many Change the verb form
reveals
hours
are spent in the library by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to all students
at Correct article usage
the university
university
of Britain.
Capitalize word
University
Overall
, undergraduates who are reading books spend less pattern than both postgraduates and other students
.
It can be clearly seen that just under two-thirds undergraduate
level Change preposition
of undergraduate
students
spend at most seven hours
per week than the average proteges. Therefore
, the figures were 63% and seventeen percent
respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, a tiny minority of freshmen spend more than fifteen hours
, whereas
bachelor
, master's and Change noun form
bachelor's
PhD
Correct your spelling
Ph.D.
students
in this
category are just above 50 percent.
Meanwhile, the time spent in library
for Add an article
the library
a library
further
students
appear
differently. Correct subject-verb agreement
appears
Subsequently
, most spend till
14 Change preposition
apply
hours
per week (85%), but from this
exactly Add a comma
,this
one half
of the Add a hyphen
one-half
students
spend at least one hour in a British library, which is approximately three times more than the corresponding figure for postgraduates at university.Submitted by dnm.best on
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