The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The given maps display the
city
of Norbiton in its current state and how it is going to be after the reconstruction.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the town is going to be changed from industrial space to residential space as factories will be replaced by houses and other facilities.
Linking Words
First,
the main Linking Words
square
of the Use synonyms
city
will be untouched Use synonyms
while
there will be a new road, which will connect the river to the main Linking Words
square
via a new bridge. The current road is Use synonyms
also
going to be connected to the main Linking Words
square
via another small Use synonyms
square
with a tiny road between them.
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Moreover
, houses are going to be built in the places of factories all over the Linking Words
city
. There will be a new school on the east side of the Use synonyms
city
and a new playground is going to be constructed on the left side of the school. Use synonyms
Besides
, a medical centre in the southeast and shops in the southwest of the main Linking Words
square
Use synonyms
is
going to be built.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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