The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The given maps display the
city
of Norbiton in its current state and how it is going to be after the reconstruction.
Overall
, the town is going to be changed from industrial space to residential space as factories will be replaced by houses and other facilities.
First,
the main
square
of the
city
will be untouched
while
there will be a new road, which will connect the river to the main
square
via a new bridge. The current road is
also
going to be connected to the main
square
via another small
square
with a tiny road between them.
Moreover
, houses are going to be built in the places of factories all over the
city
. There will be a new school on the east side of the
city
and a new playground is going to be constructed on the left side of the school.
Besides
, a medical centre in the southeast and shops in the southwest of the main
square
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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going to be built.
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  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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