Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that a certain workders deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.

It has been thought that to unreasonably specify the range of age to retire for every profession is disadvantageous, with belief that the retirement and getting a pension should depend on each profession. I agree with
this
statement. Nowadays, especially in employee
health
, labour welfare is continuously being more realized and has become the one of important factors that be considered a proper age for retirement. Because the period of one’s life is limited by their
health
,
then
one should duly have the right to happily live after hard
work
. Whether will intend or not, to refuse to accept or neglect it will be resisted.
For
this
reason, each job should be determined to retire at a different age.
For instance
, professions require much labour
such
as construction
work
in which workers waste amount of energy during their
work
, resulting in worse
health
, Occupation who must
work
in dangerously chemical places, because of
such
chemistry in workers’ bodies, should retire early.
Furthermore
, the
health
is not only physical but
also
mental. The most severe effect on mental
health
is stress or pressure including not enough relaxation. Affecting poor mental
health
workers, the worker should sooner retire.
For example
, lawyers or nurses are required to waste relaxing time working. And most customers having a lot of problems
such
as sickness or personal dispute always are found by them. So their final period of life should be used for resting early.
To conclude
, it points out that each occupation is different regarding the
health
effects on workers. To set equal retirement for all may be a disadvantage.
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