The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's sport between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
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The first chart displays information about the
montly
expenditure on Correct your spelling
monthly
children
's sports in pounds and the second chart shows data about the number
of offspring (millions
) in three disserent
sports (football, Correct your spelling
different
athletics
and swimming) between 2008 and 2014.
Overall
, the amonunt
of money which Correct your spelling
amount
spent
on Add a missing verb
was spent
children
's outdoor activities rose in the given period. Additionally
, between 2008 and 20014, footbal
always was the most popular sport.
In 2008, 20 pounds was spent on Correct your spelling
football
sport
classes and facilities. Between 2008 to 20014 Change the noun form
sports
this
number
was
gradually increased to just over 30 pounds. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, footbal
was Correct your spelling
football
alway
been the most favourite one with approximately 7.5 Correct your spelling
always
millions
followers in 2008 and more than 9 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2014.
In the case of Change to singular
million
athletics
and swimming, in 2008, almost no children
participated in athletics
and more than 2 millions
Change to singular
million
ones
participated in swimming, Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
in 2014, athletics
had more participants than swimming with less than 5 millions
and almost 4.5 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, in this
given period, The number
of swimming athletes was
gradually increased and the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of athletics
experienced fluctuation. In 2011, the Replace the word
athletes
number
of both groups
Change noun form
group's
groups'
participantc
was similar with 2.5 Correct your spelling
participants
millions
Change to singular
million
children
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