Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you photo of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter -Thank them for the photos and for the holiday -Explain why you didn’t write earlier - Invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear David, What’s up? Guess what? I just got the photos of the

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holiday that you sent me. As for the photos you took during the holiday, I wanted to say thank you, and especially to

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me to your place and take the time to send me these photos! The pictures are amazing! Great job! So, let me explain to you why I didn’t reply earlier! Do you remember when my phone fell on the water at the park? I thought it was fine but two days after it let me down. I just got back from the technician who repaired it today! Anyway, I writing today to say thank you, but

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to invite you for the next Christmas Holiday! You will come to stay and discover my new house. I have plenty of space and you will feel at home! Well, let me know for the next trip! See you soon! Take care! Cheers Tony

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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