1. It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that
the
vehicles should be stopped from Correct article usage
apply
the
urban areas and Correct article usage
apply
people
should consume bicycles in order to get a
destination. Change preposition
to a
This
essay completely agrees with that statement because many people
use
cars
in city
as the Correct article usage
the city
results
it will lead to Fix the agreement mistake
result
a
serious Correct article usage
apply
pollutions
and Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
traffic
jams
.
A methera of megalopolis have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
such
as air and noisy
pollution. Replace the word
noise
In other words
, many men or women use
cars
to obtain their destination hence
it has negative associations with the use
of non-renewable fuels like the
petrol and diesel engines Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
cars
emit pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
such
as carbon monoxide, nitrogen oxides, sulfur dioxide that contribute to poor urban air quality. As a results
, it leads to an Correct the article-noun agreement
result
increasing
in morbidity in both humans and animals. Replace the word
increase
For example
, many people
in the
Kazakhstan have Correct article usage
apply
problem
with Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Correct pronoun usage
their lung
lung
from bad air owing to Fix the agreement mistake
lungs
use
Correct article usage
the use
a
plethora of automobiles in the city.
Another reason why utilizing Change preposition
of a
a
plenty of Remove the article
apply
cars
in the city centers
Change the spelling
centres
cause
Change the verb form
causes
traffic
jams
. That is
to say that traffic
jams
often occur during rush hour or after the big event because there are more cars
on the road than normal. Therefore
, people
usually
late for their jobs or meetings, Add a missing verb
are usually
they
can cause car accidents and Correct pronoun usage
which
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
dramatically
Change the word
dramatic
rise
in the rate Change the verb form
rises
death
accidents. Change preposition
of death
For instance
, many people
in the
Uzbekistan Correct article usage
apply
late
Add a missing verb
are late
their
jobs or Change preposition
for their
schools
in the morning because of Fix the agreement mistake
school
traffic
jams
.
In conclusion, automobiles and public transport should prohibited from cities and towns because it has drawback
for Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
people
like pollutions
and Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
traffic
jams
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