1. It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that
the
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vehicles should be stopped from
the
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urban areas and
people
should consume bicycles in order to get
a
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destination.
This
essay completely agrees with that statement because many
people
use
cars
in
city
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the city
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as the
results
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result
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it will lead to
a
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serious
pollutions
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pollution
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and
traffic
jams
. A methera of megalopolis
have
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pollutions
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pollution
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such
as air and
noisy
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pollution.
In other words
, many men or women
use
cars
to obtain their destination
hence
it has negative associations with the
use
of non-renewable fuels like
the
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petrol and diesel engines
of
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cars
emit
pollutions
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pollution
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such
as carbon monoxide, nitrogen oxides, sulfur dioxide that contribute to poor urban air quality. As a
results
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result
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, it leads to an
increasing
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in morbidity in both humans and animals.
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, many
people
in
the
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Kazakhstan have
problem
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problems
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with
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their lung
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lung
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lungs
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from bad air owing to
use
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the use
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a
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plethora of automobiles in the city. Another reason why utilizing
a
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plenty of
cars
in the city
centers
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cause
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traffic
jams
.
That is
to say that
traffic
jams
often occur during rush hour or after the big event because there are more
cars
on the road than normal.
Therefore
,
people
usually
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late for their jobs or meetings,
they
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which
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can cause car accidents and
it
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dramatically
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dramatic
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rise
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in the rate
death
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of death
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accidents.
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, many
people
in
the
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Uzbekistan
late
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are late
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their
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for their
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jobs or
schools
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school
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in the morning because of
traffic
jams
. In conclusion, automobiles and public transport should prohibited from cities and towns because it has
drawback
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drawbacks
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for
people
like
pollutions
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pollution
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and
traffic
jams
.
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