The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below
The given bar chart presents information on children participating in different types of leisure activities in Australia. As an
overall
trend, it is observed that boys are more physically active than girls.
At the initial look, we can see that almost all the children spend most of their pastime watching TV/videos. This
includes both the
genders.
Amongst the other activities mentioned, electronic and computer games have taken precedence over the rest of them with about 4/5ths of the lads and 3/5ths of the lasses playing games online indoors.
Another major thing we can observe here is that males dominate females in all the leisure sports mentioned except art and craft, where women appear to come on top. About 6 out of 10 girls happen to be interested in crafting as opposed to just 4 out of 10 boys preferring the art. A similar number of boys is observed to be into skateboarding and about the same number of girls as mentioned before Correct article usage
apply
has
taken up bike riding.
In conclusion, males are seemingly more physically active than females Correct subject-verb agreement
have
whereas
females usually preferred
to remain indoors.Wrong verb form
prefer
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