The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the highs and lows in the quantity and quality of junk food being eaten by Australian adolescents between the
year
1975 and 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, we observe in 1975, the demand for Pizza and Hamburger
were lowest as Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
compare
to Fish and chips.
Wrong verb form
compared
To begin
with, we see people are
consuming Pizza and Unnecessary verb
apply
Hamburger
less than 20 Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
times
a year
in 1975. However
, Pizza gained a very sudden popularity and in the year
1985
it Add a comma
1985,
is
consumed 80 Wrong verb form
was
times
a year
. Whereas
in the same year
the Hamburger is eaten 40 times
a year
. Furthermore
, in 2000 both these items are
eaten almost 90 – 100 Wrong verb form
were
times
.
In comparison, Fish and Chips are showing a total
opposite trend. We notice that people were eating it 100 Change the word
totally
times
a year
in 1975. Later on in 1980
it dropped to almost 80 Add a comma
1980,
times
. Nevertheless
, it again become
popular in 1985 and is consumed more than 90 Wrong verb form
became
times
. But after sometime
, it again showed a downward trend i.e., in 1990 it Replace the word
some time
is
nearly 60, in 1995 it Wrong verb form
was
is
50 and in 2000 it Wrong verb form
was
is
almost 40 Wrong verb form
was
times
a year
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