The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the highs and lows in the quantity and quality of junk food being eaten by Australian adolescents between the
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year
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years
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1975 and 2000.
Overall
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, we observe in 1975, the demand for Pizza and
Hamburger
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Hamburgers
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were lowest as
compare
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to Fish and chips.
To begin
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with, we see people
are
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consuming Pizza and
Hamburger
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hamburgers
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less than 20
times
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a
year
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in 1975.
However
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, Pizza gained a very sudden popularity and in the
year
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1985
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1985,
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it
is
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consumed 80
times
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a
year
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.
Whereas
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in the same
year
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the Hamburger is eaten 40
times
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a
year
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.
Furthermore
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, in 2000 both these items
are
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eaten almost 90 – 100
times
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. In comparison, Fish and Chips are showing a
total
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totally
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opposite trend. We notice that people were eating it 100
times
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a
year
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in 1975. Later on in
1980
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1980,
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it dropped to almost 80
times
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.
Nevertheless
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, it again
become
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became
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popular in 1985 and is consumed more than 90
times
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. But after
sometime
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, it again showed a downward trend i.e., in 1990 it
is
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nearly 60, in 1995 it
is
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was
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50 and in 2000 it
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was
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almost 40
times
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a
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Consumption
  • Fast food
  • Australian teenagers
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Significant rise/decline
  • Compare
  • Contrast
  • Implications
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fish and chips
  • Data points
  • Period (time frame)
  • 25-year period
  • Paraphrase
  • Notable features
  • General increase
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