The graph below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980

The graph below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980
The bar chart compares the
number
of people who were arrested in five different countries over a
period
of 50 years from 1930 to 1980. In general,the
figures
for imprisonment fluctuated over the given
period
,
although
the United States had the highest
number
of
prisoners
whereas
Great Britain had the lowest
number
of
prisoners
. As can be seen from the graph,the United States had the highest indicators of
prisoners
for the majority of a given
period
,and in 1980 the
figures
for
this
country peaked at nearly 140,000.Canada had the highest
figures
in 1930 and 1950 with approximately 120,000
prisoners
in both years. The
figures
for New Zealand and Australia fluctuated between 40,000 and 100,000
prisoners
,
although
imprisonment in New Zealand tended to be the higher of the two.
In contrast
to the
figures
for other countries,the
number
of
prisoners
in Great Britain rose steadily between 1930 and 1980 and reached about 80,000
at the end
of the
period
.
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