Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health poblems. Sugary products should be made more expense to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
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axpense
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expensive
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apply
good
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a good
people
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people's
health
.
Nowadays, so many Use synonyms
product
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products
cantain
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contain
contains
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sugar
and Change to a plural noun
sugars
an
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a
public
. High Add an article
the public
level
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levels
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sugar
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not only harmful to the nation but Correct your spelling
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population
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the population
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, NGOs should spread awareness about eating healthy food and drinks. state Linking Words
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should
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more and more woman are getting work which is good for the country's development. Add an article
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the Government
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products
.
On the other side, To improve Change preposition
of products
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health
of the nation government can impose high taxes on Add an article
the health
product
which are harmful. Fix the agreement mistake
products
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the tax
sugar
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which
will have Correct pronoun usage
apply
great
impact on Add an article
a great
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sugar
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the sugar
industries
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industry
sugar
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price
will increase by which the public will consume less which will have Fix the agreement mistake
prices
great
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a great
health
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limited
amount. But if the state Add an article
a limited
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puts
sugar
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then
poor people will face Linking Words
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difficulty
buy
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buying
such
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kinds
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products
.
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of products
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, the above information Linking Words
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apply
the
how sugary Correct article usage
apply
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items
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