Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health poblems. Sugary products should be made more expense to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
I strongly agree that sugary
products
should be made more and more axpense
so that people consume less as much as possible. The below information Correct your spelling
expensive
expense
describe
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describes
about
how increasing price can have Remove the preposition
apply
good
impact on Add an article
a good
people
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people's
health
.
Nowadays, so many product
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products
cantain
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contain
contains
sugar
and Change to a plural noun
sugars
an
chemical which can harm Change the article
a
public
. High Add an article
the public
level
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levels
sugar
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of sugar
dont
not only harmful to the nation but Correct your spelling
are
also
to the health
of population
. Add an article
the population
a population
For example
, NGOs should spread awareness about eating healthy food and drinks. state shoud
support NGOs. Nowadays, it is Correct your spelling
should
an
trend among children Change the article
a
for trying
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to try
new
new drinks by which Correct word choice
apply
there
are consuming more and more Correct pronoun usage
they
sugar
. However
, there is even advantages about
as new drinks are coming Change preposition
apply
in
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into
market
more and more woman are getting work which is good for the country's development. Add an article
the market
a market
Thus
, Government
should support eco-friendly Correct article usage
the Government
good
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goods
as well as
community should also
support such
kind
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kinds
products
.
On the other side, To improve Change preposition
of products
health
of the nation government can impose high taxes on Add an article
the health
product
which are harmful. Fix the agreement mistake
products
For example
, increasing tax
on Correct article usage
the tax
sugar
which
will have Correct pronoun usage
apply
great
impact on Add an article
a great
sugar
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the sugar
industries
and Fix the agreement mistake
industry
sugar
price
will increase by which the public will consume less which will have Fix the agreement mistake
prices
great
impact on public Add an article
a great
health
. Sugar
is good for limited
amount. But if the state Add an article
a limited
will put
more and more taxes on Wrong verb form
puts
sugar
then
poor people will face diffectly
in Correct your spelling
difficulty
buy
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buying
such
kind
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kinds
products
.
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of products
To conclude
, the above information describe
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describes
about
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apply
the
how sugary Correct article usage
apply
iteams
are harmful and government can control Correct your spelling
items
on
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apply
it
. The above data describe Correct pronoun usage
them
about
how taxes Remove the preposition
apply
plays
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play
an
great role Change the article
a
on consume
of Replace the word
in the consumption
products
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