In some high schools part of the curriculum requires students to participate in community work such as helping the elderly or disabled. In what way do children get benefits from this? Do you think it should be part of the curriculum?
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part
in so many activity
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activities
as well as
in community
work
which have
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benefits
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me
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part
of the curriculum.
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for
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community
work
. As children are in high schools
they should take Fix the agreement mistake
school
part
in community
work
so they can get so many benefits
like there
knowledge increase. By taking Correct your spelling
their
part
in different activity
people get more Fix the agreement mistake
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an
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and
thinks
. If Correct your spelling
things
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a child
child
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children
do
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apply
community
work
physical development and national development take place. Thus
, a school should focus a student
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students
to take
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taking
part
in work
. For example
, by helping the elderly or disables
kids can get blessings from Wrong verb form
disabled
whose
groups.
Institutions should make rules for children to take Correct pronoun usage
their
part
in activities. For instance
, if a child
Sunday goes for
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to
community
work
and then
plays video games, it can help both child
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children
as well as
the community
. If a kid joins new NGOs or community
work
he will meet new people from Correct pronoun usage
whom
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person will face really of
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benefits
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old person and Change the article
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the
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a
child
.
To conclude
, the about
information describe about Correct word choice
apply
benefits
and advantages which student gets by working in the community
. Hence
, every child
should be encourage
to Change the verb form
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work
in the community
for it
development. School should Change the pronoun
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to do Correct your spelling
encourage
work
. According to
me it should part
of Add a missing verb
be part
curriculum
.Add an article
the curriculum
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