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More and more women go out to work. It is the government's responsibility to subsidise them and provide free staffs and facilities to care for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

#women #work #government #responsibility #subsidise #staffs #facilities #care #children #idea
I am writing to express my interest in the English teacher position at
Yeshomeclass
. Before I was an engineer with a passion for English teaching, and
in
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 the beginning of
this
 year I
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 that I must choose what I love to do, so I
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to choose
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to become an English teacher full time unlike part-time before. With passion and
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 I am confident that I would make a positive contribution to
Yeshomeclass
. When I heard you shared about your program
Yeshomeclass
, I could see the value of the program and what
Yeshomeclass
 can bring to students. With a background as
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assictant
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assistant
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 management, I think that I can contribute to the program. I am passionate about teaching and always put the success of students in central. I am committed to creating a positive learning environment that fosters creativity, collaboration, and critical thinking. I am
also
 dedicated to helping students develop the skills they need to succeed in their
study
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 and beyond. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my qualifications
further
.
Submitted by yeshomeclass on

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