The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart and pie graph provide information about the number of females and males who attended different evening courses,
along with
their ages in 2009 at an adult education institution.
Overall
, the majority of attendees are women in all classes except for sculpture, with Language being the most popular out of four. In terms of age groups, most of the students consist of older learners. Drama, Painting, and Language had a significantly higher volume of female students, compared to males, at approximately 20, 30, and 40 females respectively,
whereas
male learners ranged from around 10 to 25 in these three subjects. It is
also
important to mention that Language had the most students out of all subjects.
In contrast
, men almost double the amount of women in the sculpture class, with the figures of 10 in the former and 5 in the latter. Meanwhile, the proportion of 50 or over was the highest age bracket in any of the four groups, which had a total of 42 per cent in
this
age group.
While
, learners who are in their 40-49 years old were the second largest, with a figure of 26 per cent respectively.
On the other hand
, those who are in 30-39, 20-29, and aged under 20 were all just under 16 per cent.
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