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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares, the
overall
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 crowd in Japan between the years 1950 to 2055 and the table, the
population
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 over 65 age. To summarize, in the given period
population
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 in Japan stood first in the
year
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 2005 and the least witnessed was 1950. People over 65 in future increased
while
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 in the
year
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 1950, the average
population
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 was 4.9%. In the
year
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 1950, Japan recorded 84.1
million
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 as the total
population
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whereas
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 it kept on increasing for the rest of the years.
However
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, the maximum strength was noticed in the
year
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 2005 with 127.8
million
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 public followed by continuous decline till the
year
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 2055. Turning to the table, over 65 in the
year
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 1950 was 4.1
million
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 in
population
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 and 4.9% in total.
Likewise
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, 25.7
million
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 with 20%, 37.2
million
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 with 34% and 36 in the years 2005 and 2035 admittedly.
On the contrary
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, the highest was 36.5
million
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 and 41% in the
year
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 2055.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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