Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many have different views on how to tackle

crime

and whether or not it is possible to introduce effective measures to deal with

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issue.

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essay will demonstrate that more actions should be considered to reduce illegal activity in order to create a safer and more pleasant society. One key argument is that it is necessary to invest in

crime

prevention awareness and education through government initiatives. Citizens should be informed

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to protect themselves from certain types of

crime

and not become a target of criminals. In Ho Chi Minh City street theft is a common problem which could be easily solved by individuals taking greater responsibility for their possessions. Increased knowledge among the general population would assist in lowering

crime

levels. Despite

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for reasons of social inequality that exist in the modern

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these suggestions may not have the desired effect. There is a significant wealth divide in many populations which can motivate individuals to resort to criminal activity in order to support themselves and their families. A person finding it hard to earn a living, and facing growing financial pressure, can easily be tempted to commit theft

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or be lured to work for gangs within the

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trade

for example

. Once involved,

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vicious cycle of poverty and

crime

is difficult to escape from. From my perspective, criminal activity can be prevented with appropriate action from the authorities.

In addition

to increasing awareness and education within the general population, it is crucial to show offenders that there are alternatives to a life of

crime

and give them opportunities to reintegrate positively into society.

For instance

, many European countries have rehabilitation programmes for criminals where they can participate in community projects in order to gain valuable work experience and earn a basic salary.

This

solution not only reduces the

crime

rate but

also

brings benefits to the local population. Taking everything into account, it is clear through a combination of increasing public knowledge and

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offenders,

crime

prevention can be accomplished.

This

essay has demonstrated that these measures can be effective over a longer period of time.