The diagrams below show the Riverpark area of 20 years ago and the Riverpark area now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the development of the Riverpark area in the 20-year period.
Overall
, there have been lots of infrastructure improvements in terms of building a new railway station on the bottom-left corner, the marina has been built along the seaside, which may attract a lot of visitors and tourists. It is noteworthy that these developments have occurred without any noticeable damage to the trees and nature.
To begin
with, the petrol station to the south of Estuary Road has been replaced by the post office, as well as
the factory was replaced by the huge supermarket on the western side from
the pedestrian road, and the new shop area was built there. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, the bird house
was constructed, which is now surrounded by trees. Correct your spelling
birdhouse
Furthermore
, the college to the east of Sun Road was expanded approximately one and a half times. However
, there are a number of places that were
not changed in 20 years, Verb problem
have
such
as the library and doctor's surgery at the centre of the map.Submitted by elvish on
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