The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.
The pie chart represents the number of mouthpieces in various
languages
in Canada in 1996,2006 and 2016.
Half of the native folk spoke in English over the period. while
the ratio of Urdu is significantly increasing and other languages
remain constant.
IN 1980, overall
half of the mouthpiece was speaking English as their native language and compared to other language
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Urdu and Chinese were slightly spoken by the fellows in Canada comparing other Native Correct word choice
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Languages
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But in 1990, the people commenced to talk in their Native language as Urdu and English slightly decreased by 55% and other languages
remained constant.Submitted by insighttribez on
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