The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

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The pie chart represents the number of mouthpieces in various

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in Canada in 1996,2006 and 2016. Half of the native folk spoke in English over the period.

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the ratio of Urdu is significantly increasing and other

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remain constant. IN 1980,

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half of the mouthpiece was speaking English as their native language and compared to other

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Urdu and Chinese were slightly spoken by the fellows in Canada comparing other Native

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. But in 1990, the people commenced to talk in their Native language as Urdu and English slightly decreased by 55% and other

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remained constant.

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The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Today every large city facing traffic jam problem. what are the causes and how can it tackle

In today's very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?