The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate
how
Correct word choice
what
graduate
and Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
the
higher degree Correct article usage
apply
students
decide to do after they came
out from the UK university in 2008, with Wrong verb form
come
exception
of permanent Correct article usage
the exception
work
. Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of students
whether graduate or postgraduate, they
want to go Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
study and only few
of them Change the article
a few
dedicated
to voluntary Add a missing verb
are dedicated
work
.
To begin
with the graduate students
, almost 30,000 people prefer to enrol in Correct article usage
a master
master
degree, which is the highest value among the remaining categories. Followed by, Change noun form
master's
the
figure of individuals who did part-time Capitalize word
The
work
and do
not have any occupation Wrong verb form
did
were
almost the same at Correct subject-verb agreement
was
aroun
17,000, Correct your spelling
around
while
only 3,500 of them want
to improve Wrong verb form
wanted
to
society Change preposition
apply
by
volunteer Change preposition
through
work
.
Likewise
, the postgraduate students
had lower
people than the previous, Correct word choice
fewer
their
Correct word choice
and their
decition
Correct your spelling
decision
decisions
were
stayed in the same Unnecessary verb
apply
raking
, Correct your spelling
range
although
there was a narrowed gap between part-time job
and Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
continue
Wrong verb form
continued
study
, with 2,535 and 2,725, respectively. The remaining categories stayed at the same position, but lower than the first ones around 10 times.Fix the agreement mistake
studies
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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