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Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

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Children are the tender buds of
the
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society and they are required to be taught
values
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 of life.
Therefore
, some people tend to believe that the possession of cooperative
values
 is required
for
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 them. I will discuss the merits and demerits of
both
 aspects before reaching
to
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any opinion. To inaugurate with, there are many reasons why children should have competitional
value
.
Firstly
, competition motivates youngsters to accelerate their efforts to attain a higher level in education and in other activities. They start
doing work
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 hard to compete with others and understand the
value
 of hard work.
This
 dedication and hard work help them to understand first everywhere.
Secondly
, oppositional
value
 includes self-confidence and self-independence when they participate in activities and compete with others, they are more likely to have a feeling of
self-Reliance
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 and that result in
best
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 decision taken ability in them.
On the other hand
, it is needless to say
that
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how important is it to generate the
value
 of cooperation.
This
 is the only feeling by which
a children
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children
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 can learn teamwork, team spirit, tolerance and patience.
Moreover
, if the history is
same
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 it becomes quite
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 that the
well known
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 icons of the society are only those who had a helping and sacrificing attitude.
To conclude
, after
quantify
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both
, competition and cooperative
values
, I feel that
both
values
 have
its
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 own importance.
Thus
, a child should be brought up by considering
both
 equally.
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