The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of five different energy sources in 1983 compared to 2003.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
oil was the main fuel source that Correct article usage
apply
used
in both years; Add a missing verb
was used
this
figure witnessed a slight decline since 1983, while
the remaining power sources increased steadily in this
period with the exception for
hydropower and coal.
Change preposition
of
To begin
with 1983, this
year
just over 40% of power was generated by oil, which was the highest value among the resources. Followed by coal and nuclear energy that
Correct pronoun usage
which
were
the second and Change the verb form
was
third ranking
at around 20%. The neutral gas and water combined at only 15%, which were the least Add a hyphen
third-ranking
favored
fuels.
In 2003, there Change the spelling
favoured
were
a marginal drop in coal and petroleum to 38% and 13%, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
nuclear and neutral gas risen
to 24% and 21% Wrong verb form
rose
in
Change preposition
apply
this
year
. However
, water remained the lowest source in both year
and Fix the agreement mistake
years
this
value stayed the
same percentage Change preposition
at the
at
the previous Change preposition
as
year
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