The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph illustrates the number of the
population
living in the rural area in some Southeast Asia countries such
as Philippines
, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia
between 1970 and 2020 and the forecast from 2030 to 2040.
As can be seen in the graph given, in 1970 the country has
the least Wrong verb form
had
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
the
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apply
population
about 13% being
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apply
Indonesia
. In the
contrast, Correct article usage
apply
at
the same year, the Change preposition
in
population
in Philippines
was the highest about 32%. Followed by Correct article usage
the Philippines
that
the Correct word choice
apply
population
idensity
of Correct your spelling
density
identity
Malaysia
and Thailand
, at 30% and 19% respectively. In the next year, we have some changes, the highest position changed. The highest figure of the population
at that time replaced
by Add a missing verb
was replaced
Malaysia
, at 40%. The next position was Philippines
, there was a slight increase Correct article usage
the Philippines
about
33% and there Change preposition
of about
were
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was
a
stability in the number of the Remove the article
apply
population
of Thailand
and Indonesia
, at 22% and 17%. In 1990, Philippines
had a quick rise in Correct article usage
the Philippines
the
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apply
population
about
47% and Change preposition
of about
Malaysia
also
had a mild growth about
45%. The percentage of the Change preposition
of about
population
of all
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Thailand
and Indonesia
continued to stay constant. In the next years, there was an
fluctuation. From 2000 to 2040, there Change the article
a
were
a significant upswing in the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
population
of Malaysia
and Indonesia
and the quantity of the population
living in cities some
nations like Change preposition
in some
Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
went ups
and Replace the word
up
downs
. The Replace the word
down
population
idensity
of Correct your spelling
density
identity
Malaysia
and Indonesia
was at 60% and 25% in 2000 and up to 80% and 55% in 2040 respectively. Besides
that, the percentage of the population
of Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
was at 44% and 27% in 2000 and up to 46% and 41% in 2040.
Overall
, there was an upward trend from 1970 to 2040.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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