The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed
The tables display three sources for the police fund and the pie charts illustrate three groups as
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money was spent on in 2017 and 2018.
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Overall
, the total budget for the police had insignificant changes as all three supporters increased their investments insignificantly over two years. Linking Words
Besides
, salaries had the biggest amount of money in the given time.
The biggest investor for the police budget was the National Government with 175.5 and 177.8 million for both times. Local Taxes was the second source with almost 100 million Linking Words
however
, other sources like grants paid only 38 million in each year.
As can be seen in the pie charts, the paychecks of employees took most of the budget with 75% and 69% respectively for two years. Linking Words
Moreover
, 17% of the money in both periods was allocated to the buildings and transport. Linking Words
Finally
, the technology had 8% and 14% of the fund as its investment increased slightly after a year.Linking Words
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