With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In the past people used to eat a
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of organic
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, but nowadays time has changed, and humanity has been using more and more
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food
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.
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, I would say that to keep healthy individuals should use more organic
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rather than Genetically modified
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a
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of using letters can lead to serious problems. One strong argument in favour of advantages is the cheap cost of
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kind of
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can be easily found in any supermarket or shop. Because
GM
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foods
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are made in factories,
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there are a
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of
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food
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factories in the world.
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means that individuals will save their money, and time.
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, the American World statistic of
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2022 year showed that genetically modified
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costs just over 2 per cent cheaper.
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in some ,
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GM
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products
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can win organic
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. There are several arguments why organic
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is better than
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food
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. people’s
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. The first factor is human
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. There might be difficulties with organisms
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as heart, stomach, head diseases and so on.
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means that human beings who use
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products
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a
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will live fewer years.
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the statistics of 2022
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just over 61 per cent of people died because of being overweight and having
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problems caused by
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products
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.
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, it is a process of growing. When human beings eat a
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of
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food
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individual brains will think much worse,
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moreover
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people will grow slowly. Biology research showed that a few centuries ago our ancestors were 10 to 15 times bigger than now,
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much more clever. Because everyone at that time could write.
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control of eating and use less
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foods
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will protect our
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,
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will keep our living years.
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would suppose that
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food
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can not replace organic
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. Using more organic
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can extend people’s lives, and keep them healthy.
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