Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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The environment
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currently is damaged by humans in a wide range of ways, so
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they have to take responsibility to limit the effects.
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environment
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environmental
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problems and what governments and individuals should do to tackle
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these
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issues. There are two main severe threats to the
environment
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the
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pollution and waste. Global warming, these days,
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increasingly
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the most serious problem
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Earth, which is the result of gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes by vehicles.
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,
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huge quantity of waste is released by people contaminating the Earth and polluting rivers and oceans. Authorities could take many steps to minimize
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.
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, the government should impose new laws to restrict
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factory’s
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gas emissions by using renewable energy in production.
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, it is necessary to improve public transport systems and introduce “green taxes”
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private cars.
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, politicians need to encourage their citizens to commute by public vehicles, which could help decrease air pollution in major cities. People
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should be in charge of the urgent environmental concerns. They have to enhance the use of environmentally friendly vehicles
such
as buses or electronic cars
instead
of driving, which could reduce the exhaust fumes.
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, people should purchase
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products in order to avoid releasing too much waste. A good example
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this
case is that Vietnamese governments spur their citizens
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more paper bags when going
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shopping, which could help cut down on plastic bag consumption. In conclusion, both
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national
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authorities and individuals must understand
devastating
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the devastating
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impact they have on the
environment
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them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pollution: contamination, emissions, pollutants, industrial waste
  • Deforestation: habitat loss, biodiversity, urban development, logging
  • Climate Change: greenhouse gases, global warming, fossil fuels, renewable energy
  • Overfishing: unsustainable, fish stocks, marine ecosystems, conservation
  • Waste Production: non-biodegradable, plastics, recycling, waste management systems
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