The diagram shows the production of hydroelectricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The drawing illustrates the multi-step process of generating hydroelectricity.
Overall
, what stands out from the picture is that there are 6 steps in the production of hydroelectricity starting from the restoration of water
in the reservoir and ending with the distribution of electricity via the
long-distance power lines.
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This
process begins with the water
on the reservoir that will be passed through a gate-like metal grid known as the intake. Followed by the water
going through a long tunnel that is
the penstock, after which it will pass the generator's turbine which results in the creation of electricity that will then
be stored in the powerhouse. On the other ,hand the water
flows out to the river.
After these series of steps electricity from the powerhouse can now flow via the long-distance power lines.Submitted by Anneya
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