The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. (Bell Hill Farm in 1976-->Bill Hill Environmental Centre 2006) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. (Bell Hill Farm in 1976-->Bill 

Hill Environmental Centre 2006)

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 

comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the developments of
Bell
Hill
Environmental
Centre
in 2006 in comparison to the farm which was in 1976.
Overall
, the structure of
Bell
Hill
was changed from a farm to an environment
centre
with several facilities,
however
farmhouse
stayed unchanged.
To begin
with 1976,
Bell
Hill
used to be a farm. In the north of the
hill
, there was a barn for planting corn and
also
a storage for trucks.
Furthermore
, the east side of the
hill
was for caring for cows and chickens which were near to the
farmhouse
in the
centre
of the
hill
. In 2006 with the advances in technology,
Bell
Hill
's usage was completely changed to an environmental
centre
. The barn was replaced by a multimedia room and a recreation area was built in the farmyard.
Moreover
, cow sheds and chicken care were replaced with student housing
while
the
farmhouse
was still in the
centre
of the
hill
. Similar to the
farmhouse
, storage usage did not change totally and it was used as parking
this
year.
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