Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
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money
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the masses
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feel
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people
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situations
due to
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journeys
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a job
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can learn distinct culture
from there when they go to different overseas Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
in addition
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in their life.
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it anywhere
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tourism
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the government
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cities
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powerful
than other countries if they have more Correct quantifier usage
more powerful
money
and best
infrastructure. Correct article usage
the best
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due to
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that
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can give more benefits than other things. Correct pronoun usage
which
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culture
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cultures
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tickets
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people
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person
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