The charts below show the average temperatures in 12 months in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year.
The line graph and table respectively illustrate the annual average temperature,
as well as
the aggregate share of yearly hours of sunshine in three important cities on the planet.
Evidently, throughout the line graph, the general trend of climate in London and New York is similar, with the latter possessing higher degrees in summer and lower temperatures in winter. Linking Words
In contrast
, Sydney holds an opposite pattern in terms of yearly temperature, which means the hottest months are centralized from November to the next March, Linking Words
while
the coldest time lies in July, which can drop to under 15°c.
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In addition
, the table exhibits that London possesses the lowest order of yearly sunshine hours, Linking Words
while
on the other side of the planet, New York holds the most, which attains 2633 hours per year.
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To sum up
, Sydney has the contrasting climate characteristic with the other cities. The living condition in London is more modest than in New York, Linking Words
while
the latter possesses the shiniest weather.Linking Words
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