The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.
The graphic illustrates trends concerning the amount of fast food eaten by people in Melbourne. There are 5 major types of food that are popular among the people. It includes hamburgers, fried chicken, salads, fried rice and
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but not least noodles. Back in 2005 hamburgers were in
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to the others and
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the leaderboard. It is predicted that they will attract even more customers to the restaurants in 2025. The second most favoured meal is fried chicken. It did not change much from his previous place in the list
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it will grow its influence by 45% in the near future. The
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remaining three were the lowest in the rank 19 years ago. Salads
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but surely rising its popularity and there is a possibility that it is going to be very close to the silver place. Fried rice and noodles are in the same circumstances. There is no
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them and they will hold the same place in the next year.
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