Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
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extreme activities. It is undeniable that sport Wrong verb form
undertaking
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activities
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essential part of our life. Correct your spelling
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However
, these days people think that those passsions
are relatively risky for our life.
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passions
Firstly
, it is very known
that extreme sports are curios and breathtaking. What I mean here is that Rephrase
well known
while
we doing unsafe activities our organizm
produces adrenaline Correct your spelling
organisation
due to
chemical reaction in brain
and sign delivers to Correct article usage
the brain
adrenal
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On the other hand
, it can also
be argued that curiosity
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the curiosity
person
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a person
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to say by nature a human inquisitive
so he wants to challenge himself to know does he can do it or not. Take Add a missing verb
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In conclusion, taking everything mentioned up
into account in our final analysis we can say that risky activities negatively Change preposition
apply
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, high score
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scores
sport
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However
, we can not ban the extreme hobbie
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a minority of professionals.Correct your spelling
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