Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, It can be witnessed a tendency of people prefer to accommodate remotely from their

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. Despite positive aspects of generating

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it is generally believed to cause adverse influences on

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society. In my perspective, I partly disapprove of

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statement for certain reasons. Considering the optimistic side that being separated from

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motivates young adults to be more responsible both physically or financially.

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rests on the fact that it offers them an opportunity to not only prove their self-made but

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to work harder to achieve accomplishments and contribute great values to the community.

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explains the reason why Asian

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tend to send their children

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so that they can have the chance to explore the world by themselves or even developed self-discipline skills.

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, the

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will be benefitted from

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kind of trend aside from adults since it will somehow reduce the burden for

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especially in terms of

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angle.

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, to be clear, the

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are able to create extra domestic funds that could be contributing to communities' charities or else save up for future risks.

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is analogous to

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who have mature children and they either have additional spare time to relax or revenue to spend on holidays.

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, crucial crimes involved under-aged teenagers results in long-term consequences when they are not under adulthood's supervision since it is complicated for

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to check up on their children or there are cases when the youth has not capable of protecting themselves yet.

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, living apart from

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makes gathering around for special occasions like Christmas or Lunar New Year seems more difficult due to different personal reasons. To conclude, being independent of

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brings about favourable values

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as enhancing responsibilities or reducing financial burden. Governments or social organizations should be aware of the

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issues in order to provide for the youth a decent life.