You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform

about

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you about

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my recent experience with your mover

service

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because it was a total

let down

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letdown

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Last

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last

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week 5th September 2023, I engaged your mover

service

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to shift

house

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the house

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from Tracey Road to No.45 Kelling Road. Your

staffs

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arrived at 10am,

they

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assisted with wrapping up the bulky items

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such

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apply

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for extra protection and carried

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them

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onto the lorry. We

then

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arrived at our new house and your

staffs

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staff

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helped with unloading the items, they left at about 2:30pm. As I continued with unwrapping the furniture, I noticed our sofa had a big scratch which was not present before the move.

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, one of the legs of my dining table was broken. I believe the damages were caused by the move and your staff would have noticed,

however

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, they chose to keep mum about it.

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this

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is the first time I am using your

service

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, many have recommended your

service

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, I hope you will be able to look into

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and compensate for the

furnitures

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furniture

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repair fee

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. Regards, James

kanchanakularathna1991Sat Sep 09 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

179 words

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