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You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform
about
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you about
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 my recent experience with your mover
service
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 because it was a total
let down
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letdown
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.
On
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Last
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last
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 week 5th September 2023, I engaged your mover
service
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 to shift
house
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the house
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 from Tracey Road to No.45 Kelling Road. Your
staffs
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staff
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 arrived at 10am,
they
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They
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 assisted with wrapping up the bulky items
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such
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apply
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for extra protection and carried
it
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them
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 onto the lorry. We
then
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 arrived at our new house and your
staffs
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staff
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 helped with unloading the items, they left at about 2:30pm. As I continued with unwrapping the furniture, I noticed our sofa had a big scratch which was not present before the move.
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, one of the legs of my dining table was broken. I believe the damages were caused by the move and your staff would have noticed,
however
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, they chose to keep mum about it.
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this
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 is the first time I am using your
service
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, many have recommended your
service
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.
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, I hope you will be able to look into
this
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 and compensate for the
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
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 repair fee
accordingly
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. Regards, James
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