You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform
about
my recent experience with your mover Correct pronoun usage
you about
service
because it was a total let down
.
Correct your spelling
letdown
On
Change preposition
Last
last
week 5th September 2023, I engaged your mover service
to shift house
from Tracey Road to No.45 Kelling Road. Your Correct article usage
the house
staffs
arrived at 10am, Fix the agreement mistake
staff
they
assisted with wrapping up the bulky items Capitalize word
They
such
for extra protection and carried Correct quantifier usage
apply
it
onto the lorry. We Correct pronoun usage
them
then
arrived at our new house and your staffs
helped with unloading the items, they left at about 2:30pm.
As I continued with unwrapping the furniture, I noticed our sofa had a big scratch which was not present before the move. Fix the agreement mistake
staff
Similarly
, one of the legs of my dining table was broken. I believe the damages were caused by the move and your staff would have noticed, however
, they chose to keep mum about it.
Although
this
is the first time I am using your service
, many have recommended your service
. Therefore
, I hope you will be able to look into this
and compensate for the furnitures
repair fee Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
accordingly
.
Regards,
JamesSubmitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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