You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform

about

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you about

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my recent experience with your mover

service

because it was a total

let down

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.

On

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Last

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last

week 5th September 2023, I engaged your mover

service

to shift

house

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the house

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from Tracey Road to No.45 Kelling Road. Your

staffs

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staff

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arrived at 10am,

they

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assisted with wrapping up the bulky items

such

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for extra protection and carried

it

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them

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onto the lorry. We

then

arrived at our new house and your

staffs

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helped with unloading the items, they left at about 2:30pm. As I continued with unwrapping the furniture, I noticed our sofa had a big scratch which was not present before the move.

Similarly

, one of the legs of my dining table was broken. I believe the damages were caused by the move and your staff would have noticed,

however

, they chose to keep mum about it.

Although

this

is the first time I am using your

service

, many have recommended your

service

.

Therefore

, I hope you will be able to look into

this

and compensate for the

furnitures

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furniture

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pieces of furniture

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repair fee

accordingly

. Regards, James