Some people believe that living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has many advantages while others say that it has many disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory.

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to decide where to live, and the choice severely affects their academics and career. Few people say that residing in a flat rather than a college hostel has more pros and others say that it has many cons.

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essay examines both the benefits and demerits of living in a separate accommodation from living in a college residence. Personally, I would say living in a university dormitory has more benefits. The first and foremost advantage of living in a university dormitory is students can attend

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classes regularly without being addicted to bad habits as there are strict rules everybody should adhere to them to stay in college.

Although

it has less privacy because it is shared by other pupils, it costs quite less compared to the independent apartments and even the food price is cheaper in institutes.

However

, renting an

apartment

is hard for

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in most of the cities as landlords prefer families over students.

Further

, the daily commuting is convenient by staying at the university rather than a flat.

Secondly

, living in an

apartment

offers many distinctive disadvantages, and poor academic performance is one of the

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. The disciples can be addicted to many bad traffics as they live independently and there will be no one to guide them and keep them on the correct track.

Due to

such

,habits students cannot concentrate on their studies and it will automatically affect the student's life. It can be very hard for the student to become a normal person again and it takes several months to become

such

a man.

However

, there are a few advantages like privacy. Disciples can

also

have good food, they will have a perfect diet. For ,instance my cousin who lives in an

apartment

has followed a good diet so, she reduced weight and became healthy. In my view, I say there are more disadvantages

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than advantages to staying in an

apartment

rather than in an Institute dormitory as one can lose their happy life by being addicted to nasty habits.