You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved - Describe the new house - Invite your friend to come and visit

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week, I moved into a new house in Sydney! As for the recent move, I decided to buy a new house after years of renting in the countryside. I wanted to go to a big city, because my children, Tom and Lisa, are grown up, and we would like to have access to a better school and social life. They are so happy! So, let me describe our new house!

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and most important for my wife Tina -- It is in front of the beach! We have a large garden and five bedrooms. The district is very quiet and our neighbours look so kind! You will love to live there! Anyway, I am writing to you to invite you for the next summer holidays. You always wanted to visit Sydney, so it ‘s a great occasion for you! I have a place for you and your wife and we are happy to welcome you and spare time together! And what do you think about a Fishing trip close to the Opera, sounds fun! Well, let me know your availability for the next summer! Take care! See you soon! Cheers

tony.vantrooSat Sep 09 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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198 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved - Describe the new house - Invite your friend to come and visit

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the future , more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not to travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree ?

In some countries, adults are living with their parents after graduating or even after finding a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that people living in the twenty-first century have a better standard of living as compared to previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?