You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved - Describe the new house - Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear John, How are you

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week, I moved into a new house in Sydney! As for the recent move, I decided to buy a new house after years of renting in the countryside. I wanted to go to a big city, because my children, Tom and Lisa, are grown up, and we would like to have access to a better school and social life. They are so happy! So, let me describe our new house!

First,

and most important for my wife Tina -- It is in front of the beach! We have a large garden and five bedrooms. The district is very quiet and our neighbours look so kind! You will love to live there! Anyway, I am writing to you to invite you for the next summer holidays. You always wanted to visit Sydney, so it ‘s a great occasion for you! I have a place for you and your wife and we are happy to welcome you and spare time together! And what do you think about a Fishing trip close to the Opera, sounds fun! Well, let me know your availability for the next summer! Take care! See you soon! Cheers

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7 paragraphs

198 words

8.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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