The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line chart depicts amount
of Add an article
the amount
stores
that closed and the number of resent
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recent
stores
that opened in one country from 2011 to 2018. It is clear from the graph that the number of shops
closures show a steady level for all the interval, except in 2015.
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shop
According to
what is shown, the figure of
the Change preposition
for
stores
that closed fluctuated between 6000 and above 7000 from 2011 to 2014, After which it dropped sharply to its lowest point, about 600, however
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,however
this
number rocketed to nearly 5000 before levelled
until the end of the span.
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levelling
stores
on
the other hand, sunk significantly by 4500 in 2012, Add the comma(s)
,on
nevertheless
it decreased gradually to approximately 6000, Add a comma
,nevertheless
this
figure dropped again to its 2012 level in 2015, where it remained until it dipped at 3000 in 2018.
To sum up
, we could say that, in
the end of the period, closed Change the preposition
at
stores
and new stores
are much less than the first period.Submitted by firasalfadda2 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores with synonyms.
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