It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantage? Give reason for your answer and inclue any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is said
risks
are good for professional
lives
as well as
personal
lives
. I think
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advantages of taking
risks
outweigh the
disadvantages
. On the advantage side of taking
risks
. Same time it is good to take
risks
in personal
life
and even in professional
life
too
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but only some
time
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sometimes
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. It is said that
risks
can make a person.
For example
, if a person
take
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risks
like investing money in a developing country can get great
reware
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reward
then
it is good.
Hence
, a person should think before taking
risks
. Taking
risks
in professional
lives
have more advantage
then
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than
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in personal
lives
.
However
, it is important to take
risks
. On the disadvantage side of taking
risks
. There are so many
disadvantages
in
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taking
risks
.
For instance
, if a
man
is
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already
have
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has
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a good income but still
go
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goes
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to
an
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another company and
get
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gets
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inpropore
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inappropriate
income
than
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then
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it is a great disadvantage for the
man
.
Thus
, a
man
should take advice from another
man
before taking
risks
.
Risks
in
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even in professional
lives
some become harmful for women. Nowadays
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politicians
are taking
risks
which affect
to
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the national level and the public
suffer
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suffers
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because of it. Sometimes
risks
taken in personal
life
can affect professional
life
and some
risks
taken in professional
life
can
also
affect personal
life
.
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taken
in
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professionals mainly affect more on income which
also
affects lifestyle. In conclusion,
According to
the described ,data it can
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be
said that taking
risks
has many
disadvantages
compare
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compared
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to advantages. So it can be said that the advantages of taking
risks
outweigh the
disadvantages
.
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